Hi Cam, I like how you explained how you worked through it and what difference it made to the weight of the carrot. I also liked how you weighed the carrot every day to make sure that you have the exact weight that the carrot lost. I think what you should do next time is add some more writing to improve your work.
Hello Cameron. You’ve done a great job with your carrots results. I like how you told me what you did before you weighed your carrots. You have some great pictures and some great writing. You could work on showing me how you calculated the results. Your next step is to include more information. From Arly.
Kia Ora Cameron, Its Richard from Mamaku hub.You have done a Miharo (Amazing) job. I really like that you weighed the carrot every day. Maybe next time you could write a bit more about the carrot. How much was the different weight every day? Na Richard
Kia Ora Cameron. I like how you cut the carrot up in to little pieces. Next time you could try a different vegetable like a onion. This reminds me of when my nana cut a carrot open and it squirted her. Why did you put it out in the sun? Poroporoaki (bye)
Hi Cam,
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained how you worked through it and what difference it made to the weight of the carrot. I also liked how you weighed the carrot every day to make sure that you have the exact weight that the carrot lost. I think what you should do next time is add some more writing to improve your work.
Hello Cameron.
ReplyDeleteYou’ve done a great job with your carrots results.
I like how you told me what you did before you weighed your carrots.
You have some great pictures and some great writing.
You could work on showing me how you calculated the results.
Your next step is to include more information.
From Arly.
Kia Ora Cameron,
ReplyDeleteIts Richard from Mamaku hub.You have done a Miharo (Amazing) job. I really like that you weighed the carrot every day. Maybe next time you could write a bit more about the carrot. How much was the different weight every day?
Na Richard
Kia Ora Cameron. I like how you cut the carrot up in to little pieces. Next time you could try a different vegetable like a onion. This reminds me of when my nana cut a carrot open and it squirted her. Why did you put it out in the sun? Poroporoaki (bye)
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